SV: [ipv6-wg] Proposal for new charter: Version 3

Fully support from my end as well...

Great work guys... :)

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Fra: ipv6-wg-admin at ripe.net [mailto:ipv6-wg-admin at ripe.net] På vegne av Shane Kerr
Sendt: 1. desember 2009 11:15
Til: ipv6-wg
Emne: [ipv6-wg] Proposal for new charter: Version 3

All,

I have tried to incorporate additional comments in this version of the
charter. I don't plan on producing any more versions - we can debate
each word forever, but I think we have reached the point of diminishing
returns.

If we have consensus, then we can consider ourselves rechartered!
Otherwise someone else can work thorough the text again (or start over
from scratch).

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IPv6 is the next generation IP protocol. The IPv6 working group exists
to promote IPv6 adoption.

The working group activities may be anything useful in helping people
to deploy IPv6, and to manage IPv4/IPv6 co-existence. These activities
include:

* Outreach
* Education
* Sharing deployment experiences
* Discussing and fixing operational issues

The working group will cooperate with operators and others, both 
inside and outside the networking industry, to share resources and
combine efforts.
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Differences:

-IPv6 is the next-generation IP protocol. The IPv6 working group exists
+IPv6 is the next generation IP protocol. The IPv6 working group exists

De-hyphenating. Or dehyphenating, if you prefer. ;)
 

-* Discussing operational issues
+* Discussing and fixing operational issues

I don't see any harm in mentioning that we'll try to fix operational
issues in addition to discussing them. 


-The working group will co-operate within the networking industry and
-without, to share resources and combine efforts.
+The working group will cooperate with operators and others, both
+inside and outside the networking industry, to share resources and
+combine efforts.

More hyphen fixups. Clarifying that the "networking industry" does not
just mean operators. Remove the clumsy "within/without" text that
apparently only made sense to me.

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Shane