[ipv6-wg] Proposal for new charter: Version 3
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Shane Kerr wrote: > All, > > I have tried to incorporate additional comments in this version of the > charter. I don't plan on producing any more versions - we can debate > each word forever, but I think we have reached the point of diminishing > returns. > > If we have consensus, then we can consider ourselves rechartered! > Otherwise someone else can work thorough the text again (or start over > from scratch). > > ----------------------------------------------------------------------- > IPv6 is the next generation IP protocol. The IPv6 working group exists > to promote IPv6 adoption. > > The working group activities may be anything useful in helping people > to deploy IPv6, and to manage IPv4/IPv6 co-existence. These activities > include: > > * Outreach > * Education > * Sharing deployment experiences > * Discussing and fixing operational issues > > The working group will cooperate with operators and others, both > inside and outside the networking industry, to share resources and > combine efforts. > ----------------------------------------------------------------------- > > Differences: > > -IPv6 is the next-generation IP protocol. The IPv6 working group exists > +IPv6 is the next generation IP protocol. The IPv6 working group exists > > De-hyphenating. Or dehyphenating, if you prefer. ;) > > > -* Discussing operational issues > +* Discussing and fixing operational issues > > I don't see any harm in mentioning that we'll try to fix operational > issues in addition to discussing them. > > > -The working group will co-operate within the networking industry and > -without, to share resources and combine efforts. > +The working group will cooperate with operators and others, both > +inside and outside the networking industry, to share resources and > +combine efforts. > > More hyphen fixups. Clarifying that the "networking industry" does not > just mean operators. Remove the clumsy "within/without" text that > apparently only made sense to me. > > -- > Shane > > I believe this is a keeper :)
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