[ipv6-wg] Proposal for new charter: Version 2

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Fearghas McKay fm at st-kilda.org
Thu Nov 5 10:38:05 CET 2009

Shane

On 4 Nov 2009, at 03:09, Shane Kerr wrote:

Looks good.

> The working group will co-operate within the networking industry and
> without, to share resources and combine efforts.

My only nitpick would be the use of within and without - without is  
not really in common useage.

Perhaps:

The working group will co-operate with both the networking industry  
and the wider internet (or perhaps user?) community, to share  
resources and combine efforts.

HTH

	f

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