[diversity] [Ext] Draft CoC and response guide

Sasha,

THANK YOU for contributing such a stellar draft! I've gone through and 
made some edits, some more British spelling-isms + putting some of the 
goals in active tense. I also made the scope (in terms of who it applies 
to) a bit more explicit.

Warm regards,

Amanda



On 08/04/2019 10:36, John Springer wrote:
> I agree, excellent work!
>
> I have suggest some minor edits of the Response guide.
>
> John Springer
> acting solely on my own behalf
>
> On Sat, Apr 6, 2019 at 5:10 AM David Huberman 
> <david.huberman at icann.org <mailto:david.huberman at icann.org>> wrote:
>
>     Sasha,
>
>     The draft CoC is quite excellent. Nice work!  I have completed a
>     copyediting pass in "suggesting" mode:
>
>     - normalized words to British English spellings (3 instances of
>     behavior were changed to behaviour)
>     - removed contractions
>     - fixed a few typos
>     - enforced consistent paragraph spacing
>     - enforced the Oxford comma
>
>     /david
>     writing solely on his personal behalf
>
>     On 4/5/19, 7:32 AM, "diversity on behalf of Sasha Romijn"
>     <diversity-bounces at ripe.net <mailto:diversity-bounces at ripe.net> on
>     behalf of sasha at mxsasha.eu <mailto:sasha at mxsasha.eu>> wrote:
>
>         Hello all,
>
>         Closely based on the work I did for Write the Docs, with some
>     adjustments to fit the RIPE community, I put together a draft for
>     a CoC and for a response guide.
>
>         CoC:
>     https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__docs.google.com_document_d_1IAJj9UjW2zroz5v6XQYgYEYotfZlV4Trk2vRdaoPaP4_edit&d=DwIGaQ&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=iTOW7nSt3tBCc5xNiHfQNhFilU9Ki9_nVAHGfa3QG5w&m=ag_h5GXVGbSsDgGW59YleMXVaOJnV4ga6CJcCIfZ38A&s=sy8t_T8v902B5ESqiOxzVnu6ezEWJaYUIsfScYJuvyY&e=
>
>         Response guide:
>     https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__docs.google.com_document_d_1gaLo4axYDRTpQnhUJyG92EHBmEIkxSDN8Urmy-2Dzn9nQ_edit&d=DwIGaQ&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=iTOW7nSt3tBCc5xNiHfQNhFilU9Ki9_nVAHGfa3QG5w&m=ag_h5GXVGbSsDgGW59YleMXVaOJnV4ga6CJcCIfZ38A&s=tLYhKXwOC4CmhGYH2JhF4h-Qy6XZgbV4ujIJt5XPyus&e=
>
>         I went with Google docs for now, as it’s quite accessible. You
>     can leave comments and suggest changes, and we can discuss broader
>     topics on the mailing list. There are a few parts about structure
>     still to be filled in, but let’s start here.
>         We haven’t really spoken about any of the details, other than
>     a general “this can be a starting point”, so I don’t know what
>     kind of discussions other people would like to bring up.
>
>         Sasha
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