Re: [address-policy-wg] WG Charter

[Daniel Karrenberg <]

On 11.08 20:47, Hans Petter Holen wrote:
> 
> The Address Policy WG develops policies relating to the
> management and registration of Internet resources
> (currently IPv4, IPv6 and AS Numbers) by the RIPE NCC
> and its LIRs within the RIPE NCC service region. It also
> co-ordinates policies with the other RIR communities and
> liaises with the IANA and ICANN on address policy issues.
> The Address Policy WG meets three times a year at RIPE
> meetings and has an open (publicly archived) mailing list.
> Anyone with an interest in Internet numbering issues is
> welcome to observe, participate and contribute to the WG.

Nit: IPv4 and IPv6 *addresses* or shorter "Internet addresses".

Suggestion: replace "Internet resources ....)" by
"Internet addresses and routing idetifiers". One can
always add other stuff if necessary.

Nit: mentioning IANA is sufficient, no need to mention ICANN.

Suggestion: replace "It also .... issues." with
"The WG coordinates its work with the appropriate bodies 
of the other RIRs and the IANA."

Daniel